Editing Log - Session 3 - Improvements
Editing Log - Session 3 - Improvements:
Editing session 3 on ancillaries primarily consisted of working on improvements that I discovered from audience feedback from the Hollywood demographic. They said that fonts, vinyl shape and cd tray placement was to be worked upon.
I changed my font from Superclarendon to American Typewriter as it was plain and standard font which represents the Britpop genre. I also changed the shape of the vinyl cover to a more square shape rather than rectangular shape that was previously. This was done in order to make it look more realistic as if it was the actual product in real life in front of you. I also moved the dic tray from top left to the top middle of my digital so it would also be in the correct place as if it was a product sat directly in front of me.
Overall, this post is to summarise the changes and reasons for the changes to my rough ancillary tasks in order to gain constructive criticism to gain maximum potential of the product.
Editing session 3 on ancillaries primarily consisted of working on improvements that I discovered from audience feedback from the Hollywood demographic. They said that fonts, vinyl shape and cd tray placement was to be worked upon.
I changed my font from Superclarendon to American Typewriter as it was plain and standard font which represents the Britpop genre. I also changed the shape of the vinyl cover to a more square shape rather than rectangular shape that was previously. This was done in order to make it look more realistic as if it was the actual product in real life in front of you. I also moved the dic tray from top left to the top middle of my digital so it would also be in the correct place as if it was a product sat directly in front of me.
Overall, this post is to summarise the changes and reasons for the changes to my rough ancillary tasks in order to gain constructive criticism to gain maximum potential of the product.
Audience Feedback
Audience Feedback:
I showed people of the Hollywood demographic my magazine advert, digipak and vinyl edits for Under The Radar. Everybody was impressed with the content of all of the institutional information included swell as the images chosen. They said it looked to industry standard and could fit in.
However, when I asked about what ic Ould improved I was told by the majority that the font didn't suit the genre. It was apparently not bland enough and standardised to the fonts used by the Britpop bands. So I will be looking to change this in order for it to look more like a Britpop piece.
Another thing mentioned, on the digital part, that the disc tray section was in the incorrect place. This means that I will also m one this from the top left too the top middle part of the digipak template. In the same area, the vinyl was told not to be an even square and look evenly distributed but more of a rectangle. I will change this by editing the size and shape of the front and back cover to make it look more professional.
The point of this post was to gain constructive criticism on my ancillary tasks in order to make improvements that would match my target audience.
I showed people of the Hollywood demographic my magazine advert, digipak and vinyl edits for Under The Radar. Everybody was impressed with the content of all of the institutional information included swell as the images chosen. They said it looked to industry standard and could fit in.
However, when I asked about what ic Ould improved I was told by the majority that the font didn't suit the genre. It was apparently not bland enough and standardised to the fonts used by the Britpop bands. So I will be looking to change this in order for it to look more like a Britpop piece.
Another thing mentioned, on the digital part, that the disc tray section was in the incorrect place. This means that I will also m one this from the top left too the top middle part of the digipak template. In the same area, the vinyl was told not to be an even square and look evenly distributed but more of a rectangle. I will change this by editing the size and shape of the front and back cover to make it look more professional.
The point of this post was to gain constructive criticism on my ancillary tasks in order to make improvements that would match my target audience.
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